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To Her Cunning MasterThe world is small, and time is short,
But that’s no excuse for such a sport.
This cunning, master, is a crime,
For which I’ll make sure you’re out of time.
I’ve no interest in this waste,
Your words, they sting—a sour taste.
I felt a cold chill when you entered the room,
You spoke only of debauchery and also of doom.
It is sad that you act in this way,
Hurtful badinage is all you say.
And your blandishment is rather poor
You treat ladies as simple whores
And you’re nothing but a bilious buffoon:
Taught never to speak, only to swoon.
A pathetic, non-poetic pair of eyes
How long did it take you to garner these lies?
They’ve said for years that chivalry was dead,
First disappointed, I now hate you instead.
You are in fact that worst human being
Whom I’ve had the displeasure of meeting
If only you were one of the living dead
I’d have an excuse to bash in your head.
I am not an object, not a hegira for the night
Nor is my body a rented
Grimwar - Terms and Phrases [QUICK GUIDE]Grimwar - Terms and Phrases QUICK GUIDE
Grimwar - the war between Darkstalkers and Prandorians
Darkstalkers - the invaders
Cultists - people that supports the Darkstalkers
Rebels - people who fight against the Darkstalkers
The Rip - a hole in the sky through which the Darkstalkers entered Prandor
Prandor - the planet the Grimwar takes place on
The District - Prandor's capitol
King's Isle - Prandor's smallest continent; home of Pan's Tree and The District
Apparina - Prandor's second largest continent; full of jungles and beaches
Nickel - Prandor's largest continent; cold and mountainous
Mastinix - Another mountainous continent; warm and foresty
Vivia - Prandor's most inhabited continent; grasslands, forests, and hills
Crissen - Prandor's most dangerous continent; volcanoes and lava
Grimwar - Terms and Phrases Defined Grimwar - Terms and Phrases
Begins in 2170 when the Darkstalkers invade Prandor. The planet divides up into two groups: the Cultists and the Rebels.
Invaders from another dimension that enter Prandor through the Rip. They are dark, shadowy creatures whose only desire is to bring havoc to others.
Prandorians that support the Darkstalkers in the Grimwar. Essentially traitors.
Prandorians that fight against the Darkstalkers in the Grimwar. The good guys.
A giant hole in the sky through which Darkstalkers enter Prandor. There is no way to seal the hole, allowing more and more Darkstalkers to enter.
The planet on which the story takes place. Very similar to Earth in appearance, but has far more paranormal and magical ac
Dream Rant Dreams. We all have them, don't we? What is it about them that makes us so eager to achieve them? Is it the essential premise of improving our lives for the better? Perhaps it's the satisfaction of knowing you accomplished something.
We all have different dreams. Some of these dreams are easier to obtain than others. Does this imply that some of these dreams don't deserve to be reached? Who decides what is possible and what is not?
How do we know what dreams are worth pursuing? Is there any judgment for or against one's dreams?
And why do we give up so easily on that which we want? Perhaps others get in the way? Maybe you're not willing enough to reach your fantasy?
Most importantly, how do we know when our dream has been accomplished? Do we feel a sense of pride and success?
And then what? I'm weary about these so-called "unreachable fantasies." And yet, some dreams almost feel as so.
Rant: Names and NamingTopic: Names and Naming
Opening: I've briefly discussed why you should pick original, interesting names in my Originality rant, but I think it needs to be expanded upon. Not only the naming of your character is important, but everything else that requires a name must also be unique.
1.) Let's start with the most obvious: your character's name. As always, when creating a character, there are several hundreds of factors that go into that character. However, one of the most important is the name. It will be used over and over to refer to your character. So pick something interesting and fitting! It's a good idea to research names and their meanings to give you ideas or connections. If you were making a character with fire powers, instead of naming them something dumb like Blaze or Flame, search for "names that mean fire" and pick one of those! It's way more original. Trust me.
2.) Sometimes it's necessary to name a character's weapon. Instead of calling some sort of gun, a gun, come up wi
Rant: The GivenTopic: The Given
Opening: Aside from godmodding and lack of creativity, randomness is one of the worst things to have in any roleplay. Many times roleplays are ruined by random ideas that don't fit into any other ideas. There are two points to adress about this.
1.) First and foremost, you must go with what is said in a roleplay. Any roleplay whatsoever must consist of a basic idea which must be followed, which is made up of the given. The given is what is said by other participants. You see, for the most part, roleplaying is like improvisational acting: you cannot change something when it is given to you. For example: If I say that a giant ant attacks the city, the roleplay needs to progress in this direction, with limited randomness and additions. If somebody were to do something random, such as taking the roleplay to Mexico, randomness has begun and the given has been dropped. Don't ever drop or ignore the given!! Also note that you should never set up a given with one outcome in mi
RECOLLECTION In a land barren and far from civilization, CAMILLA VON FROSTSWORD I settles and starts a kingdom. She is accompanied by a small army and small number of civilians. With a little hard work, a small kingdom is established. The KINGDOM OF FROSTSWORD is hereby created.
The kingdom prospers for approximately three months before a neighboring kingdom is established. Under the rule of KING DECIMUS TESLA, the KINGDOM OF SPARKSUN, likes FROSTSWORD has several months of good fortune.
However, no longer than two months later, TESLA commanded a full on assault on FROSTSWORD, who had anticipated this. For two long weeks, the two KINGDOMS battled for FROSTSWORD's land, but FROSTSWORD claimed victory. TESLA swore revenge.
In reply to this threat, CAMILLA I sent her top knight and assassin AARON BLACK to kill TESLA to prevent any further wars involving the two KINGDOMS. BLACK obeys
Rant: OriginalityTopic: Originality
Opening: Far too often Fan Characters and Original Characters are so undeveloped that there's simply nothing special about them. Maybe your character has the same form as everybody else. Perhaps your character is the same species as everybody else's. Maybe your character has unoriginal powers or abilities. I will be discussing some unoriginal aspects a lot of people add to their characters.
1.) The first thing that should always be original in a character is their backstory. A very common backstory choice for the unoriginal involves having the character's parents die, forcing him or her to live his or her own. Blah blah blah. Try to verge away from common backstory elements as much as possible. This is your chance to make your character stand out be creating an interesting past for them to have experienced.
2.) Another very unoriginal concept that people don't focus on is battle styles. A lot of times, a character simply must fight; it's what gives a story action. Th
Rant: GodmoddingTopic: Godmodding
Opening: A lot of times, usually during roleplays or character development, people have the tendency to create overpowered, or godmodded, characters. This can be described in several ways, each of which I will be discussing so you may edit your character(s) accordingly, provided you use this advice.
1.) Godmodding can be firstly described as being overly-powerful or unrealistic. Now, let's be honest here for a moment. When we make our characters, we want them to be incredible. We want them to make an impression others, right? So naturally, you give your character anything and everything that you either like or find badass. If your character does any of the following, he or she is overpowered.
a - Forms. Forms are good to have. They provide a character with a sort of back-up ability and neat way to spice things up. However, having a form in which the character becomes invincible, goddly, etc. is stupid and godmodded. Forms shouldn't be a d
lobos muertoscuando eligieron a las dos victimas, esas personas se fueron,
sin nada de pertenenencias tan solo dos cuchillos oxidados y
sus vidas, el gruñido a lo lejos se oía, mas nadie salia, solo
las dos sombras, algo temblorasas en la noche, y el rastro
de nieve y orina, los animales de la noche olieron el miedo
de sus presas, pero estaban felices por los del fortin, pues
era carne tranquila con adrenalina, tal vez mas suave
para comer, los dos decidieron tomar dos rumbos diferentes,
mientras los zombies de ojos azulados como la nieve,
iban a el fortin.
.-Que mierda todos se dirigen para aca, y los dos puerquitos,
preparar las armas, que se a vecina una batalla o masacre, y
ponga a los dos huerfanos amarrados en la entrada, mientras
preparo las defensas de esos monstruos del hielo.
La noche se hizo obscura, mientras todavia la puerta
se abria cada vez mas, gracias a el viento helado.
edificacion caduca.-Debemos elegir dos estupidos de nuestras filas.
.-tal vez, los caminantes sin vida se apaciguen con esas
.- se hace tarde, y no se sabe que va a pasar.
las luces se van y no hay casi fuego en el fuerte,
el viento helado se siente hasta en las piezas oseas,
cuando los monjes soldados observan dos huerfanos,
que lo estaban cuidando hace tiempo
el mas viejo de todos.
.-Esa sera nuestra verdadera ofrenda comandante.
.-sino queda otra, toca.
se abre la puerta y un viento mudo helado
entra por toda la edificación.
SammyCSF PARODY: Rant Against The Cartoon Fanbase(This is a parody of Sammyclassicsonicfan's "Rant Against The Sonic Fanbase. Although it reflects most of my opinions, DO NOT take it seriously.)
OKAY, THAT IS IT! THIS IS THE FINAL STRAAAAWW!
I've had it with all you frickin trolls, and all you frickin haters, and all you frickin stupid fan-fricks! YOU GUYS ARE THE ONES THAT RUINED CARTOONS FOR EVERYONE! Can't you see that?! What the frick are you guys DOING!? Asking for all this fricking garbage?
WHY DO WE NEED ADVENTURE TIME? WHY DO WE NEED REGULAR SHOW? WHY DO WE NEED ANOTHER SPONGEBOB MOVIE? WHY DO WE NEED A- A FANBOY & CHUM-CHUM REVIVAL?!
WHY DO WE NEED ALL THAT?! CAN'T WE HAVE A PROPER 90s STYLE CARTOON SERIES, FOR CRYING OUT FRICKING LOUD?! You guys killed the Rocko series! All you frickin' FAN FRICKS, and your FRICKING FANTASIES SPEWED OUT AT YOU BY FRICKING POOP MERCHANTS! I'M TIRED OF ALL YOU FRICKS!
I'M SO FRICKING MAD, AND I'M...So fricking mad! I mean, you guys, YOU GUYS, HAVE OFFICIALLY MADE ME LOSE MY MARBLES!! WHY CAN'
sacrificio altruistaera muy tarde y el cafe caliente no ayuda a respirar,
ese liquido negro que a veces se hace marron con
.- A pasado tiempo sanchez y ruiz no llegan.
.- su tiempo de guardia paso.
.- así que hay que escoger otros dos valientes con vejiga
vacia, hay un voluntario?.
.- si no han regresado es que deben estar paseando en otro lugar,
mas tranquilo que este.
.- pienso que deben estar muertos y que los salvajes lo convirtieron en cena.
.- Es muy tarde es mejor esperar a mañana.
.- no obedecer ordenes se castiga con la muerte.
.- que cuestion tan errada, siempre seremos ovejas para el matadero.
.-así es la cuestion militar.
.- somos monjes guerreros, que por un juramento no tenemos ni una
.- es sacrificio altruista.
ojos heladosla pareja de la loba, era un caminante
de los que llaman blancos,
que existian antes de que viniera
los hombres, el mundo era diferente,
con poco sol, y todo helado,
no se necesitaba de calor,
para poder existir, así que
este era una especie de rey
en un mundo realmente muerto,
pero sus enemigos moran en las
sombras, y son los que estan
con la luz, pues la luz mas
clara es donde esta luz.
Así que la loba tuerta
observo las dos crias
fuera de la puerta del muro
del fortin, era el momento
del tributo, del sacrificio,
para sus hijos, y el cuerpo
del anciano yace sin vida,
el único que podia hacer
algo para proteger a pancho
y mariangelica, que tienen
mucho frio, por el viento
helado que se aproxima,
la puerta del fortin que es
pesada se abre poco a poco,
gracias a el empuje de las fuerzas
invisibles, de los hombres de ojos
la sociedad de lobosera una loba robusta, de gran tamaño,
era gris, con un solo un ojo,
el otro no observado por su pelaje,
no se sabia si nacio con un solo ojo,
pero le decia el ciclope gris de cuatro
patas, la que era jefe de la gran manada,
de los lobos del mas alla norte,
que solo aceptaban como amos a los
ojos azules de la muerte,
en lo mas de la montaña se mueven,
y esta noche estan devorando a los
humanos que se encuentra a su paso,
pero la loba gris, no es una,
en ella hay cuatro seres,
que a pesar de su forma de cuatro
patas, caminan ergido en dos,
son los angeles obscuros,
los mensajeros de la muerte,
y que han a escogido a hombres
de ojos azules de la muerte,
aunque no lo parezca.
Mykan's InvitationMYKAN’S INVITATION
A lot of you have been steamed at me (For ridiculous reasons) and a lot of you who seem to like will eventually end up hating me anyways.
Without the ability to post my fics to blow off steam, and you’re all laughing at me and making things worse. There no other course.
If you want to come an beat me out some more, here I am (I may not always be online though)
Cameos Needed : Magician Mission #2Errm... Hi there, it's me, Aurora... Err, how should I put this...?
I need some of you folks to require a Magician's magic, because, you know, Tristan asked us to help Legadia inhabitants... Royal Guards included, of course.
So, if you're interested in helping my on my mission, can you leave your application in the box below... the "Comments" part, is that it? *A-hem*, Well, I'd help anyone, from the apprentices to the leaders, but there is a limit to what I can do... Yeah, I'm looking at you, Avaron! What kind of leader is sadist enough to make their apprentices to undergo such a trial? And I think I've got enough in helping Leon babysitting the royal childs... *cough, cough*
Well, in the comment box, leave your app, and also the kind of assistance you'd like to get. Here's an example :
Leon, Knight, need healing.
To have an idea of what I can do, you should read my app : http://yoshifull.deviantart.
_I'm Fine_ Pt.13/14"He's gonna think we're weird" I sighed, as we started to slowly walk somewhat away from him. He walked inside the bathroom. "SEE? HE WAS JUST USING THE BATHROOM!" "Maybe that's what he wants us to think, my friend had smirked at me. What the hell were my friends thinking??? We waited for like another 2 minutes. He came out, "Where's he going now?" "We look like retards.." I sighed, as they dragged me around. He walked up to us, "You guys are terrible at being sneaky.." My friends and him laughed together. "I just remembered! I have to help the librarian with the book's!" "Aw, BYE." "Bye, be careful." He smiled at me, as I started walking toward the library. I walked in, "Thank you for helping me do this dear!" One of the librarians was an old lady, of course I'd help.. "I need you to help me get those books off the top of that stack. Be careful on the foot stool!" "I will.." Who gets hurt on a foot stool?! I went to the 2nd step and reached for the books. I grabbed them, and slowly st
MessageI am absolutely ill of sharing such hallways with insufferable imbeciles with little to no grasp on the concepts that encompass common sense and humanity. Have none of you shame or humility to display when you ease to impress your peers with such an attitude? My kindness and abstinence in such matters has thus been shattered and I will be retaliating with the mimicked actions and reactions you dish out to me on a silver platter. Prepare your tiny minds to soak up my brilliance and quake in horror as I responsibly dispose of your past behaviors and replace them with proper human morals as quickly and effectively as I deem possible for a being of your maturity.
As of now, war has been declared, and I do not intend to peacefully call a truce any further. Those who oppose me are therefore doomed to a dreadful battle heading in their direction for days to arrive. You shalt not escape my vast intellect or superior cunning, for you yet have acted with such decency that normal beings do, so I
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